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we are trying something new we had alot of complaints on high pressure tactics on a one on one tour we have a group presentation and if you like what you see all we require is a hand shake

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Shake on it?

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That is a huge run-on sentence. Try a period at the end of each complete phrase:

We are trying something new. We've had a lot of complaints about high pressure tactics on the one-on-one tours. We will now have a group presentation, and if you like what you see, all we require is a hand shake.
we are curentally trying a new program although we have had alot of complaints on high pressure tactics, on our individual touring group. if you would like to see all we require is a hand shake.

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