POLL - Which Version of this slogan is Better?

I need to know which version of this slogan you like better:
(1) Creative Storefronts, we make it click
(2) Creative Storefronts, making it click

Answer:
how about:

"Your Creative Storefront will deliver 400% ROI within 3 months, or we'll refund your entire fee PLUS write you a check for $10,000"

If you have the ability. why hide it?

Scott
Creative Storefronts, we make it click
the first one
#1
One
The first. The second answer is a trendy use of language, but it will look old in a few years.
Have you got anything else to pick from?
I don't like the "click" metaphor.
Other than that I don't think either one is better than the other.
For the pol, number 1.
But. How about:
Creative Storefronts: We bring your customers in.
You'll want to ensure that no one else has prior rights to the slogan. I listed some links where you can do some preliminary checking. However, please be aware that this is merely scratching the surface of what's out there.

Only comprehensive research will tell you if the name/slogan is truly available. But, these links are free & a great place to start, so I'd try them out first.

Comprehensive research consists of looking at marks that are similar in Sound, Appearance or Meaning in the pending & registered Federal AND State trademark files as well as the US National Common-Law files.

There are other sites that offer free searching capabilities in conjunction with their commercial services, so I'm not able to post those links due to the Yahoo! TOS. You'll also want to check domain names & yellow pages, so simply do a search for "free domain name search" and "national yellowpages" and the appropriate links will pop up.

Hope that helps! I wish you much success & happiness in all your ventures!

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